I realised my writing these days has became too business-like. Its straight to the point. Hardly any adjectives.
I used to write more frivolously just a few years ago. Then, I could take the time to describe the surroundings, the feelings in whatever I wrote. I made references to other objects more.
Now, I write " I was on the bus when I saw this young couple"
A few years ago, I would have written "It was a sweltering day and I was squashed on the bus. A body wet from perspiration brushed against me, I turned around and saw this young couple"
Something like that.
I think I lost it.
Was reading an essay by a Secondary school kid and it jolted me.
I guess life hardened us.
1 comment:
how true. even now as I looked at some stuff I wrote during NUS days I can only say... I've lost it too.
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